We were scattered, spread out across the Earth and each of us thought we were alone. We were not told our purpose; there was no sign or divine mandate. Life had been given to us, and we soon realised that it was life that could not be taken away.
Humanity was thrust upon us, it was unavoidable.
We lived among them and soon learned to love them at their best and hate them at their worst. It was not long before each of us discovered how easily they could be guided. Their short lives with strong bonds proved eminently malleable to the ends of those of us who could pass a century in a single breath if we so chose.
We, the immortal, became legends and myths, and for some of us, embedded in and surrounded by humanity, we could believe that .
I was named Name / ReferenceCho'Gath — League of LegendsCho'Gath is a champion in League of Legends — a vast, consuming void-creature described as ancient, ravenous, and nearly unkillable. JL uses names from the LoL universe across their work. "The sentinel" is the narrator's role in that era: a guardian of a people. The name carries the mythology without inventing new vocabulary.. I was kind to my people and fearsome to my enemies. I built an empire of fire and stone that spanned an entire continent. And I watched it fall to the ones they would eventually call DecodedAncient Near Eastern DeitiesBa'al was the Canaanite storm and fertility god — one of the most widely worshipped deities of the ancient Near East. Ishtar was the Babylonian goddess of love, beauty, and war. El was the chief deity of the Canaanite pantheon — the "father of gods and men." The story positions them as immortals like the narrator, who were given these names by the peoples they lived among.→ Ba'al on Wikipedia. They were like me and for a time became my enemies. We fought back and forth around DecodedMount AraratMount Ararat is a dormant volcanic massif in what is now eastern Turkey, near the borders of Armenia, Iran, and Azerbaijan. It is traditionally identified as the resting place of Noah's Ark in the Hebrew Bible. The narrator's wars here place the immortals at the exact location where the oldest mythologies of human survival were born.→ Mount Ararat on Wikipedia for centuries before calling one another kin. While we fought ourselves, the world moved on.
For a time, I was known as DecodedHorus — Egyptian GodHorus was the falcon-headed Egyptian god of the sky, kingship, and protection — one of the oldest and most significant deities in the Egyptian pantheon. He was associated with the living pharaoh; every king was Horus in life and Osiris in death. The narrator "borrowed the name for a few dynasties" — the implication being that the Horus mythology may be an immortal's cultural footprint.→ Horus on Wikipedia. I borrowed the name for a few dynasties. I ruled in secret, speaking only to a select few, who became known as priests and priestesses.
A nation was born around me and my conspirators. It lived on long after I grew tired and slipped away in the shadows. I watched as my brothers and sisters transformed it and eventually destroyed it, just for sport.
There was a time when I simply walked the wilderness for millennia, searching ceaselessly for a reason to care.
Humanity served the others well.
The one they called DecodedZeus — Greek GodChief of the Olympian gods in Greek mythology — god of the sky, thunder, and kingship. Zeus's mythology is notable for his numerous relationships with mortals of both sexes, which produced many of the heroes of Greek legend. The story renders this as an immortal who genuinely enjoyed human company and devoted entire civilisations to pursuing it. enjoyed the company of mortal women and men alike. He devoted three empires to the pursuit of carnal pleasure. The one they called DecodedAthena — Greek GoddessGoddess of wisdom, craft, and strategic warfare — Zeus's daughter, born fully armed from his forehead. In the story she is an immortal who tempered Zeus's excesses and channelled human energy into civilisation-building rather than purely pleasure. The relationship between the two immortals here closely mirrors their mythological dynamic. tempered him, and in turn he allowed her to teach his people to dream beyond sleep. And yet, it would take outright rebellion for them to realise that humanity has never needed us.
Most of us disappeared and gave up the power we once had over the hearts and minds of mortals, seeking instead to live our endless lives in secret. We went our separate ways and soon discovered the pleasures of mortality.
The joys of love, and the pain of grief. We observed, at a distance, the beauty of that time between birth and death. In secret, we began to understand the nature of humanity, the constant flux of progress and destruction.
We watched as the world burned, and was reborn. Yet we remained the same.
Some of us would find purpose for a while — as teachers, saviours, heroes and villains. There was a time I had a taste for war. I would stalk the battlefields, ending the misery of young men caught in a meat grinder that had no salve for their screams. On every battlefield, I brought what peace I could to those that needed it. In every battle, with every blade, bullet, and blast, I hoped to be granted that eternal slumber, where I would no longer wake to find myself in a world to which I have never belonged.
It is so easy for humans to die, and it is the very reason they love to live. They live though; to love, and love is the only reason to care. Since that first day, I confess I had not discovered love. I understood pleasure. I had known joy. But never love.
You had been cast into the sea, in a plywood box that should have been your coffin. I found you on a beach, washed up on the shore of a DecodedJapanJapan — never named in the text. The cherry blossoms, the Japanese word "Himitsu," and the story's end confirm it. "A little island with big ambitions" describes Japan's imperial expansion of the early 20th century with precision: a geographically small nation that had built one of the world's largest empires by the time the story reaches its catastrophe.. You were barely a month old when I found you, barely able to scream any longer, barely clothed and barely alive.Craft NoteFour uses of "barely" in one sentence. The repetition enacts what it describes — something flickering on the edge of ceasing. It's also the most viscerally physical moment in the text before "Their Fat Man." The infant's nearness to death earns everything that follows.
I picked you up and held you, willing your cold, fragile little body to cling to life a little longer. In that moment, for reasons I am still unable to understand, I became your guardian and you became my secret whisper of home.
In the light of ages, your life was only a moment — the most precious, beautiful moment I have ever been a part of. An eternal, unrepeatable moment that lasted a lifetime.
I was there when you learned to walk, and there the first time you fell down. I wiped your tears and you wiped mine.
You were only seven when you noticed my immortality. You asked me if you were the same. Even then, young as you were, you understood that you would eventually cease to be. It broke my heart when you began to cry. When I asked you why your tears were being shed, you said it was because you knew that I would have to miss you eventually.
My beautiful Himitsu: you were always wise beyond your years.
Every spring you would pick , pinning them onto every one of your dresses. You didn't seem to mind that they withered away.
You always said that the prettiest things are never allowed to stay long, because if they were, we would stop seeing them. Only an immortal would understand that, after watching mountains rise and fall, human life is still the most beautiful thing in the universe.
Winter saw us hiding inside around the fire. I would tell you ancient stories and you would always listen. You would run around the house shouting with glee when the snow began to fall, and you would beg me to let you go outside.
I watched your wide-eyed wonder as the world around you transformed from grey to white. It was nothing new, but you still marvelled at it Craft Note"It was nothing new, but you still marvelled at it and in turn, I did too." This is the story's quiet thesis: the immortal cannot die, but the child grants them something death-adjacent — the experience of seeing the ordinary world as if for the first time. Each seasonal section is a variation on this: the child's mortal freshness restores the immortal's capacity for wonder. and in turn, I did too.
In autumn you would paint. You always said that the colours were just right at that time of year. I watched your creations evolve from vivid, carefree splashes to delicate, nuanced masterpieces. You told the stories of fleeting moments in time, captured the light of ages and made it shine.
Summer made us wander. We would travel to wherever your heart desired. I was your guardian, you were my guide. You showed me the wonder that my wanderings never had. To you, it was all so new.
In time, the little creature I had pulled from the sea grew into a beautiful, graceful young woman. You had a head full of dreams and a heart full of passion and a force of will to rival the immortals themselves.
Around you the world was at war, engulfed in chaos and fury, and you in your determined way, walked a path of peace. And then you were gone — snatched away by the fire and light and rage of a device designed only to destroy.
Some of the others have known what it is to love a human. It is always, in the light of ages, short lived.
And yet… It lingers and lives on.
My Himitsu was so much more than a period of happiness in my life. I spent centuries mourning her in a cave, until humanity took the cave from me. I wandered the ever-mechanical wastes until the sun grew dim, watching as humanity never stopped living. I hitched a ride off-world, hoping to find a home among the stars. I existed in a cargo hold as generations lived and died around me, hoping to reach a habitable planet before the resources ran out.
I watched a new world born and I watched it die. In the light of ages, each world is but a moment.
The sky will soon go black, and at last, humanity will fade away. Existence itself will cease as the last of the stars burn out, and finally, I will die.
And yet, even now, she was the most precious, beautiful moment I have ever been a part of.
The story never names what the immortals are. No origin, no species, no creator. They precede humanity; they will outlast it; they feel everything humans feel and cannot escape anything. The world JL builds is defined by absence: no divine mandate, no purpose given, no death available as exit. What the story constructs is less a mythology than an emotional logic — the question of what it would mean to live forever in a world built entirely by and for people who don't.
The text provides almost nothing: they "simply came to be," scattered, without purpose, without creator. They cannot die. They can pass a century "in a single breath if we so chose" — implying some control over their experience of time. They feel pleasure, joy, and — as the story argues — eventually love.
What's notable is what the story does not give them: power over death itself, the ability to protect those they love, any form of transcendence. The narrator spent centuries trying to die on battlefields and couldn't. The one thing humanity does effortlessly — cease to be — is the one thing the immortals cannot access.
This is the story's central irony, stated directly: "It is so easy for humans to die, and it is the very reason they love to live." The immortals cannot die and so, for most of the story, cannot fully love. Himitsu is the exception — and she is taken anyway.
The story implies rather than states: the immortals took the names Ba'al, Ishtar, El, Horus, Zeus, and Athena from the peoples who named them. The mythologies of the ancient world are, in this telling, the cultural residue of immortal beings living among humans who needed to make sense of them.
"I borrowed the name for a few dynasties" — Horus is casual, a temporary alias. The immortal used the mythology as cover, not identity. They grew tired and left; the mythology outlived them, was "transformed and eventually destroyed, just for sport" by other immortals.
What this does not mean: the story is not saying that all gods are false. It is saying that some of what humanity called "divine" was something else — beings with power but not omniscience, with longevity but not infinite wisdom, who got bored and wandered away while the civilisations they touched kept going without them.
The setting is Japan, in the early-to-mid 20th century. The text signals this through: a Japanese word ("Himitsu"), cherry blossoms as the recurring seasonal symbol, and the "Fat Man" bomb dropped on Nagasaki, August 9, 1945. The "little island with big ambitions" is Japan at the height of its imperial expansion.
The text never names Japan. This is a significant craft decision: naming the setting would locate the story historically and geographically in a way that might crowd out the intimate scale. The story is about one child, not a nation. Keeping the location unnamed keeps Himitsu at the centre rather than the war that kills her.
The word "Himitsu" itself performs this double function: it names the child in the language of her culture without making her a symbol of that culture. She is a secret — private, specific, belonging to the narrator alone.
The narrator grieves for centuries in a cave. Then wanders "ever-mechanical wastes" as civilisation industrialises the wilderness. Leaves Earth entirely. Travels in a cargo hold through generations, reaches another planet, watches it born and die. Eventually arrives at the heat death of the universe — the final state where all stars have burned out and existence itself ceases.
And at that point: "finally, I will die." The narrator's immortality ends not because they are killed but because there is simply nothing left to exist in. The universe itself is their coffin.
The movement is from cave to stars to void — a journey of increasing desolation that matches the increasing distance from the loss. And through all of it: "it lingers and lives on." The grief does not diminish. The love does not diminish. The final lines return to "the most precious, beautiful moment I have ever been a part of" — present tense, even at the end of existence. She is still present tense when everything else has become past.
My Himitsu is a short text that spans from before human history to the heat death of the universe, but its emotional weight rests on a single childhood. The craft question is: how do you justify that scale without making the intimate moment feel small, or the cosmic scale feel inflated? JL's answer is structure — the way the text moves, the way it measures, the way it returns.
The piece belongs to the lyric essay tradition — prose that organises itself around emotional logic rather than narrative logic. It is not a story in the conventional sense (no plot arc, no resolution, no transformation); it is an act of elegy, moving from before love to the end of everything, with love as the fixed point.
The immortal narrator is a familiar figure in literary fantasy — Jorge Luis Borges's "The Immortal," Anne Rice's vampire chronicles, and the long tradition of the undying observer who watches history accumulate. What distinguishes JL's version is scale: most immortal narrators have a human lifespan to reflect on. This one has the lifespan of the universe, and it is still measured against one month-old child on a beach.
The seasonal structure connects the piece to an older tradition: the Japanese poetic form of shiki (the four seasons), in which each season carries a distinct emotional register. Spring is transience and renewal; summer is abundance and wandering; autumn is beauty-in-decay; winter is contemplative stillness. JL uses all four without naming the tradition, which lets the structure do its work invisibly.
"And then you washed up on that shore." The story's single most precise sentence. It performs several functions at once.
First, it shifts pronoun: from "we" (the immortals as a group) and "I" (the narrator in history) to "you" — direct address to Himitsu, which is maintained for the rest of the text. The narrator begins speaking to her, not about her. The reader becomes a witness to a private address.
Second, it shifts scale: from centuries and empires to a single shore, a single child. The syntax mirrors this — five short words after paragraphs of accumulation.
Third, it shifts tense in feeling: the preceding section is summary (things that happened); this sentence is arrival (this is where the story actually is). Everything before it is prologue. The shore is where the piece begins.
The four seasonal sections each end with the same refrain: "Every [season], you grew older." Four repetitions of the same formal observation. The refrain is a clock — each season is a tick, and the reader counts from the first tick toward the silence that follows the fourth.
The sequence is spring, winter, autumn, summer — not the conventional order. This has structural consequences. Spring opens with cherry blossoms and the child's philosophy of transience ("the prettiest things are never allowed to stay long"). Winter follows: the ancient immortal told ancient stories to someone young enough to hear them fresh. Autumn comes third: the girl's paintings progress from "carefree splashes to delicate masterpieces" — she is older here. Summer is last: wandering together, "I was your guardian, you were my guide." The sequence moves from the child's early wisdom through her growth to the fullness of her agency — and then immediately into her death.
Ending on summer — the season of movement, of her guiding him — makes the loss feel like it happens in the middle of something rather than at the end. She is taken at the height of her life, not at its close.
It stands alone. No preceding sentence. No following sentence. The isolation is the technique: after everything that has been built, the sentence refuses to share space with anything else.
The possessives: "Their" — belonging to a world the narrator was never part of, a war fought by and for other people's ambitions. "My" — belonging to the private world the narrator and Himitsu made together over decades. These two possessives are the whole of the collision: a geopolitical weapon hitting a personal love.
The naming: "Fat Man" is the bomb's actual code name — the plutonium implosion device dropped on Nagasaki on August 9, 1945. The narrator uses the human name for the weapon, not a description. "My little girl" is not her name — the name, Himitsu, comes before and after. In the moment of loss she is not named; she is only what she is to the narrator.
The scale: "Fat Man" is a bomb designed to destroy a city. "Little girl" is one person. The sentence does not resolve this disproportion. It simply places them side by side and stops.
The story never explains why Himitsu was cast into the sea as an infant. We know she was found; we do not know why she was put there. This is not an oversight — the narrator says "for reasons I am still unable to understand." The mystery of the guardian bond is as deliberate as the mystery of the immortals' origin.
The story also never describes the mourning as having an end. "I spent centuries mourning her in a cave" — and then the cave was taken, and the mourning continued in a different form through the rest of existence. The grief does not conclude. Even the final lines maintain it as present, not past: "she was the most precious, beautiful moment I have ever been a part of." Was — past tense — but the love is still present tense in the voice.
The unresolved question the story asks: what is the value of a moment that ends? Himitsu says the answer in the spring section: "the prettiest things are never allowed to stay long, because if they were, we would stop seeing them." The story's refusal to resolve the grief is the same logic: if the mourning ended, we would stop seeing her.
The texts below trace the traditions My Himitsu is in conversation with — the immortal observer, the elegy, mono no aware, and the specific literature of Hiroshima and Nagasaki.